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You stole my heart,
From under my pillow

You’re turning me into a puzzle,
And I’m in danger of falling to pieces

You’ve turned my world upside down,
So I’m being chased by hungry butterflies

And I wouldn’t have it any other way

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I got an idea for the puzzle lines when I was talking to =perso-melodia and more or less said that, and this stemmed from that.

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:iconbright-eyes25:
i like the emphasis you provide on specific core words in your poem. ( bold ) i believe that gives your poem an edge to it. i really enjoyed reading this.
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~Chemical-Shrimp Apr 27, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed reading it :).
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:iconbright-eyes25:
thank you for sharing your creativity. :)
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~L-Yau Nov 5, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
''And I wouldn’t have it any other way''

YAAAAAAAAY :}
who would want it any other way xD

im still waiting on that day, when someone takes my breath away!
Wherever it may be, wherever it may be, IM STILL WAITING FOR THE ONE FOR ME =D LMAO.
sorry. (: random =D

ILYYY great poem :) <3
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~Chemical-Shrimp Nov 5, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Me at a previous time :giggle: Those that know not what it feels like

The one for you will be a very lucky one :D

Ilyt :XD: it's not that great, your poems are the ones that are GREAT :D <3
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Featured: [link]
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~Chemical-Shrimp Oct 23, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :heart:
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~N0-R3AL-PR0BL3MS Oct 6, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
love it es mucho!!!!
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~Chemical-Shrimp Oct 6, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:D :w00t:
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~N0-R3AL-PR0BL3MS Oct 7, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
hugs
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